Monday, May 8, 2017

Literacy Braingym:

We should have homeless shelters in Rotorua Because…
Knowing that everyone in Rotorua has a shelter that they could at least call home and experience how a home feels like.
No one wants to be homeless, as a good  community we could atleast provide them with shelter and be able to help them keep warm and safe, because you dont know whats out there rapists, pedophiles and other, providing the homeless with shelter is good for their health and safetyn.
3 Adults, teens, kids should not go through something like this, I think that everyone deserves a home and needs to be in doors to acknowledge the feeling you get when your in your own room and not in the outdoors under bridges or streets suffering with coldness and other…
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Original:
What a fantastic place the safari park is Why haven’t you been to visit There are mischievous monkeys giant giraffes and crawling crocodiles As for other animals the list is endless lions elephants peacocks pythons and so many more There is something to watch all the time a monkey swinging from a climbing frame a peacock catching food a lion climbing a ladder If you are interested in food a delicious menu is available with indoor and outdoor eating Are you still too busy to visit Surely not The park is open every day between 8am and 8pm So book a date now The animals are expecting you
Completed:

What a fantastic place the safari park is. Why haven’t you been to visit? There are mischievous monkeys, giant giraffes, and crawling crocodiles. As for other animals, the list is endless; lions, elephants, peacocks, pythons, and so many more. There is something to watch all the time a monkey swinging from a climbing frame, a peacock catching food, a lion climbing a ladder. If you are interested in food, a delicious menu is available with indoor and outdoor eating Are you still too busy to visit Surely not The park is open every day between 8am and 8pm. So book a date now The animals are expecting you.

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